Sunday, May 27, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday 5/27/12

Here are six sentences from a short story I have been working on, called "goodbye, I love...."  This is very rough.

They were strangers after all; well, almost. Danny was attracted to Griff’s profile photo on the website with his sensitive eyes, and scruffy, handsome face.  Their online chats had become personal; they both were recently out of relationships, and only looking to expand their social circles and both were adamant on their profiles, NO HOOKUPS.  They had shared details of their breakups: Griff came home to find his husband in bed, not with one, but sandwiched between two men, while Danny and his ex just seemed to drift apart.  Both Griff and Danny had been older emotionally, if not just chronologically, than their partners and both had been the nurturer in the relationship, and both had felt taken for granted, at least at the end.  It seems they understood each other.


  1. I'm hooked! Quick, turn it into a novel!! :)

    1. Thanks! It's still a short story in my head. And that reads more like a synopsis than part of the story! lol!